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Unstoppable May 18

Andy Dufresne is unstoppableSome movies are unstoppable

I’m not talking about runaway box office successes. I’m talking about those movies that can hold your rapt attention in every scene until the closing credits — whether you want them to or not.

Sometimes I’ll flip channels late at night, just to “quickly” see what talk show guests are on. Inevitably, I’ll stumble across one of my favorite movies.

That’s when the fight begins; the fight to stop watching.

I’ll keep telling myself, “The TV goes off at the next commercial.” After all, I already know what happens. And I really need to get some sleep. I’ll just watch one more sequence.

Then of course when the closing credits roll, I stagger to bed, bleary-eyed, in the wee hours of the morning.

The movie was literally unstoppable.

Is your screenplay like that?

Here are some questions you need to ask yourself about each and every one of your script’s scenes.

Does it…

  • … flow from the previous scene?
  • … address a specific goal of the main character?
  • … contain an inherent question as to what will happen?
  • … drive the plot forward?
  • … support the theme of your movie?
  • … handle any exposition in an organic, succinct and engaging manner?
  • … surprise the reader in some way?
  • … show the reader something they’ve never seen before (or in a way they’ve never seen it)?
  • … contain tension, conflict or humor?
  • … have high enough stakes?
  • … make the reader feel something? (Fear? Joy? Anger? Sadness? Compassion? Curiosity?)
  • … end on a button? (A punchline? An intriguing question? A powerful moment?)
  • … flow into the next scene?

There’s no such thing as a throwaway scene in a great script or movie. Make every one count, and your script will be unstoppable.

What are some movies that you find are unstoppable?

For me it’s The Shawshank Redemption, Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid, The Usual Suspects, The Matrix, Aliens, Kill Bill: Vol. 1, The Incredibles, The good, the bad and the ugly, and for some damn reason — Kung Fu Panda. If I tune in at any point in any of those movies, I’m stuck watching until the end.

See if you can stop watching this scene from The good, the bad and the ugly halfway through?


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