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Congratulations to Chris Bullett! Dec 29

Gideon's LawMy buddy Chris Bullett just won the November 2011 Best Script Award in the Amazon Studios contest!!! What a great way to surge into 2012.

His $20,000 winning script is called Gideon’s Law. Here’s the logline for this Thriller/Action-Adventure:

A disgraced young cop is assigned a routine civilian ride-along and quickly learns that his passenger is not what he seems and he has just entered into a brutal battle with a killer who will stop at nothing to achieve his goal.

I’ve had the privilege of reading and critiquing a number of Chris’s scripts, and I can say with confidence that he has a bright career ahead of him. (Actually, he has a pretty bright career right now!)

Congratulations!


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Modern Family as a Horror Movie [Video] Dec 26

Modern Family – Horror Movie Trailer

Alex Dunphy - Evil GeniusHere’s a little something to balance out all that holiday cheer. If you watch ABC’s hilarious Modern Family, you’ll know that Alex Dunphy is just a check box or two away from being an evil genius. So I decided to recut Modern Family as a horror movie.

In this extended trailer, all hell breaks loose at the Dunphy household over the Christmas holidays.

Funny? Horrifying? Both? Let me know what you think.


5 Reasons Why THE WIRE Was So Damn Good Dec 09

The Wire - Season 1The Wire, which aired on HBO between 2002 and 2008, is widely acknowledged as one of the greatest television dramas of all time.

Everyone knows it. No one disputes it. Yet, for whatever reason, I’d never taken the time to watch a single episode… Until recently, when I got sucked into its web of awesomeness.

I quickly blazed through season one, and am now working my way through season two. Having the benefit of seeing so many episodes back to back, I thought I’d take a crack at determining what sets the show apart.

5 Reasons Why The Wire Was So Damn Good

1. The Authenticity

The dialogue does not shy away from the vernacular of drug dealers or the cops. It’s so authentic that, early on, there were many scenes where I couldn’t even understand what the characters were talking about! The more episodes I watched, though, the less that happened.

It reminded me of an interview with Network director Sidney Lumet, where he spoke about how he was initially wary of all the obscure broadcast terms and lingo in that script. The great Paddy Chayefsky assured him that people may not understand what was being said, but it would make the scenes more believable. Boy was he right. And The Wire is no different in that regard.

Beyond that, every scene feels real. I watched an episode of Person of Interest last night. It’s a great show, but there was a scene in last night’s episode where a relaxed confidential informant (CI) happily accepts money from a detective in the middle of a crowded sidewalk in the area that he frequents. After watching The Wire, that just didn’t ring true.

2. Two Sides of a Coin

The Wire gives the “bad guys” as much screen time as the “good guys.” You get to know the drug dealers as people, who are often products of their environment, not simple thugs… how they got into the lifestyle; what keeps them there; what scares them; what they wish they could change; how different they are from one another.

In the show, as in  reality, there are good and bad people on both sides.

3. Cinematic Scope

There are some nice cinematic touches in The Wire. By that I mean things that are typically reserved for movies… In season one, lines said in the first episode are mirrored in the final episode to great effect. There’s one central, far-reaching case that spans an entire season…

But most significantly the characters change. Typically on a police procedural you get your stock characters that may have revelatory moments, but ultimately never truly change. In The Wire, there are multiple characters that go through major movie-worthy arcs, and surprises.  That lazy cop? Maybe he turns out to be an ace detective. That guilty felon who avoids prison because of an unreliable witness? Maybe he’s truly a man of conscious.

4. An Unseen World

Any time you can delve into a world, or aspect of a world, that audiences have never seen before, you’re on to something. We’ve seen cops, drug dealers, lawyers and politicians on shows before, but somehow The Wire pulls back the veil on aspects of police procedures and “the game” that have never been explored, or at least not so thoroughly.

Some of the most interesting battles in the show don’t take place on the street, they take place in offices at the upper echelon of law enforcement.

5. The Casting

I have never — I repeat — NEVER seen another show where as many actors exude such genuine menace. Stringer Bell? Omar? Lt. Daniels? Deputy Commissioner Rawls? Seriously, wow.

And every other actor in the show is terrific as well. There are some scenes where it doesn’t even matter what’s happening — you just enjoy watching because the actors (and their characters) are so captivating.

Unfortunately, it’s not something that you can expect when writing a script — only hope for.

If you haven’t seen The Wire yet, you can watch every episode on on HBO GO or Netflix. Check it out. It’s time well spent.

Oh, and if you leave me a comment, no spoilers please! Thanks!


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Which type of person are you? Nov 23

Two Types of People

There are two types of people in this world – those who are bothered by small mistakes, and those who are not.

And what’s interesting is that both types have a hard time believing that the other type really exists.

“How can you not see that mistake?”

“No one else cares about that stuff!”

Ever been on either side of that argument?

funny pictures of cats with captions

For example, yesterday a friend of mine asked me to look at a YouTube video she’d just created to promote her new landscaping business.

Among other things, I suggested that she correct a typo on one of her slides. It read:

“Regular site visits ensures a smooth installation process.”

Did you spot the mistake? It should have read:

“Regular site visits ensure a smooth installation process.”

And what was her verbatim response when I told her about the typo?

“I can live with it.”

You can live with it, but can you succeed with it?

Remember, what’s no big deal to you, may be a big deal to someone else. And that someone else may be the person deciding whether or not to give you their business, or push your script further up the ladder.

Baboon Sniper - No Big Deal

Baboon snipers roaming the neighborhood? No big deal.

All things being equal, it’s better to have a polished script than an unpolished one. Both types of people respond well to a lack of mistakes, so it’s a much safer play.

Sure, it’s difficult to eradicate every single typo from your script. But it’s usually the cumulative effect of the mistakes that’s the problem. If you push past someone’s tolerance for errors, you’re done. And many people have a very low tolerance.

Even billion dollar companies make mistakes

Here’s an image another friend of mine, on the other side of the equation, sent me yesterday. Can you spot the mistake?

Take a... peak?

And what did my friend say in his email?

“I thought you might feel my pain.”

Pain!

It goes without saying, if you can avoid giving your reader pain that’s probably the way to go. It’s okay if you don’t quite get why these kinds of mistakes are irksome — you just need to know that they are, to many of the decision-makers reading your script.

They’re already looking for a reason to pass on your screenplay. Don’t give them an easy one! Make sure your script is as polished as possible.

Which side of the fence do you fall on?


Category: Writing  | 6 Comments
5 Things to Consider When Incorporating Feedback Nov 18

I have a few friends who have a hard time knowing what to do with the feedback they receive on their scripts. So for all you similar screenwriters out there, this post’s for you.

(Note: This post has little to do with the development phase where you’re incorporating notes from executives. It deals with the rewriting phase of your script where the only people who have seen it are friends, family, peers, script consultants, etc.)

5 Things to Consider When Incorporating Feedback

Script Feedback1. Does it resonate with you?

If the note you receive on your script doesn’t make sense to you, you should never incorporate it. There has to be some recognition of its inherent validity for it to be considered. Never follow a note blindly, no matter who’s giving it to you.

2. Is everyone saying the same thing?

While it’s important to stay true to your artistic vision, ultimately you want a script that appeals to your audience. If you consistently get the same note back from your respected readers, you need to seriously consider incorporating it.

3. Does it hint at an underlying or alternate problem?

Suppose you’re absolutely sure that some story beat needs to stay in your script, yet your readers keep flagging it. It’s entirely possible that the setup to the beat, or some other aspect of the scene or script needs tweaking. Part of your job is to read between the lines of what people are saying.

4. Are you resistant to a suggestion because of the work involved in correcting it?

Sometimes we’ll bristle at a suggestion, and immediately think, “No frikken way!” Usually that happens when the suggestion involves a major change.

When you receive such a note, take a deep breath, let the feedback wash over you for a couple of days, then try to evaluate it as dispassionately and honestly as you can. If you decide the feedback is valid, it might take you a few extra weeks, even months, to rewrite your script, but that’s a much better alternative than hoping no one else will see the problem… because I promise you they will. You’ve come this far, you might as well give your script the best chance of selling.

5. Who’s giving you the note?

If you’ve just written a raunchy teenage comedy and your grandma thinks some of the lines are too offensive… you should probably take that with a grain of salt.

But that’s an easy call. Often you’ll have peers who are accomplished in one particular genre, but may not have expertise in your genre. Or maybe you’ve given them harsh criticism on their last script and they’ve been itching for some payback.

On the other side of things, if someone who’s been around the block for a number of years tells you something that no one else has told you, it’s possible they’re bang on with their feedback and they’ve seen something that more casual readers have missed.

Either way, make sure you run the feedback through all five of these litmus tests before you start incorporating it. And remember, no one knows your story better than you do.

How do you process feedback?


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