by Trevor Mayes | Jan 14, 2011 | Feedback
I’ve just finished the first draft of a new script. Now it’s time to put it away and not think about it for a few days. That will allow me to get some distance from it, so when I start the rewrite I’ll be able to look at it with more critical eyes....
by Trevor Mayes | Jan 13, 2011 | Quick Screenwriting Tips
Quick Screenwriting Tip: If your script is fantastical in nature, look for opportunities for a supporting character to react with dismay — especially if your main characters have become accustomed to the world. Used at the right time, this may: make a moment...
by Trevor Mayes | Jan 11, 2011 | Feedback
When I trade scripts with a my pro screenwriting buddies, we tend to give each other very high level notes. Just the key elements that worked and didn’t work, with specific suggestions for improvement. Sometimes, that’s all you need right? No logline, no...
by Trevor Mayes | Jan 10, 2011 | Formatting, Style
What the heck is Pre-lap? I had a good discussion with some of my screenwriting friends last week about using “PRE-LAP” in a script. Since many hadn’t heard the term before, I thought I’d cover it on my blog for those who may be unfamiliar with...
by Trevor Mayes | Jan 7, 2011 | Quick Screenwriting Tips, Scenes
Quick Screenwriting Tip: If you think there might be something wrong with your scene, then there almost certainly is. Don’t be lazy. Trust your instincts. Figure out what’s not working and fix it. Never say to yourself, “It’s just one...