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		<title>The Difference Between &#8220;Tentpole&#8221; and &#8220;High-Concept&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Jan 2012 21:55:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Trevor Mayes</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Reader Questions: Tentpole vs. High Concept I received some good questions from Lauren the other day: What is the difference between a ten-pole [sic] movie and a high concept movie? Or do they always work together? Is there a minimum budget or max budget? A &#8220;tentpole&#8221; movie is one that a studio hopes will do [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h4><strong>Reader Questions: Tentpole vs. High Concept</strong></h4>
<div id="attachment_5428" class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 260px"><img class="size-full wp-image-5428 " title="Mission Impossible 4" src="http://scriptwrecked.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/mi4poster.jpg" alt="Mission Impossible 4" width="250" height="370" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Tentpole</p></div>
<p>I received some good questions from Lauren the other day:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>What is the difference between a ten-pole [sic] movie and a high concept movie? Or do they always work together? Is there a minimum budget or max budget?</em></p>
<p>A &#8220;<strong>tentpole</strong>&#8221; movie is one that a studio hopes will do extremely well at the box office. Just like a pole holds up a tent, such a movie will provide the necessary financial support to the studio.</p>
<p>The term: &#8220;<strong>high-concept</strong>&#8221; is a little trickier to define. Essentially it&#8217;s an innovative movie idea that immediately captures viewers&#8217; imaginations in a few words and is believed to have mass-market appeal.</p>
<p>As Steve Kaire writes in <a href="http://www.writersstore.com/high-concept-defined-once-and-for-all" target="_blank">this insightful article</a>, a high-concept movie can be sold on its pitch. It&#8217;s not execution dependent.</p>
<p>Movies like <em>Jurassic Park</em> (cloned dinosaurs running amuck in a theme park) or <em>The Sixth Sense</em> (a pscyhiatrist trying to help a boy who sees dead people) are high concept.</p>
<p>Movies like <em>Star Wars</em>, or <em>Black Swan</em> are execution dependent, and therefore not high-concept. It&#8217;s hard to describe them in a few words in a way that does them justice and excites the viewer.</p>
<p>An original script may get made because it&#8217;s high-concept. If it does well, then its sequel may be set up as a tentpole for the studio.</p>
<p>In fact, most tentpole movies these days are sequels or based on franchises with built-in audiences. Usually that means they are big budget productions, where the studios put lots of money into them, expecting a lot more money to come back.</p>
<p>But there are no hard and fast rules on budgeting. It depends what type of movie it is. <em>Twilight</em> only had a $37 million dollar budget, but was expected to be a hit (though, it went on to shatter expectations worldwide).</p>
<p><strong>Humor</strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>Is it important to always add humor to high concept scripts, for the studios and agents sake?</em></p>
<div id="attachment_5434" class="wp-caption alignright" style="width: 260px"><img class="size-full wp-image-5434 " title="Limitless Poster" src="http://scriptwrecked.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/limitlessposter.jpg" alt="Limitless Poster" width="250" height="362" /><p class="wp-caption-text">High-Concept</p></div>
<p>No, not at all. It depends entirely on the genre of the script you&#8217;re writing. But most movies have at least a moment or two of humor &#8212; if only to provide a brief respite for the audience. That&#8217;s why they call it &#8220;comic relief.&#8221;</p>
<p>Regardless of the genre though, the goal is to make your script as enjoyable to read as possible. Humor <em>might</em> be a part of it, but ultimately it&#8217;s about writing an engaging script. Make the reader want to turn the page to see what happens next.</p>
<p>So if you&#8217;re writing a dark horror movie, don&#8217;t feel that you need to add humor to the scene descriptions just to make the read more enjoyable. It would probably have the opposite effect.</p>
<p>However, if you&#8217;re writing an action-adventure, where part of the goal is to make the audience laugh, then have at it. If you&#8217;re writing a pure comedy, it&#8217;s probably a necessity.</p>
<p><strong>Spiderman Reboot</strong></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>Would you say the movie “Spiderman-Reboot” is high concept?</em></p>
<p>I would say that whether the <em>Spider-Man</em> reboot is high-concept or not is irrelevant. It&#8217;s a franchise movie, and a tentpole. We know it&#8217;s going to be a hit.</p>
<p>&#8220;High-concept&#8221; is usually applied to stories that haven&#8217;t been seen before on the silver screen. <em>Spider-Man</em> has been around for a while now. Everyone&#8217;s going to go see it, not because of an innovative story concept, but rather because we already know what a <em>Spider-Man</em> movie entails.</p>
<p>The original <em>Spider-Man</em> story (young man gets bitten by radioactive spider and develops spider-like superpowers)? Yes, very high concept.</p>
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		<title>Home Video Commentary Track [video]</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Jan 2012 02:06:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Trevor Mayes</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Not Where You Saw John Ramsey  and his brother have created a hilarious commentary track for one of their crappy home movies. They critique the footage in that stilted self-congratulatory, pseudo-intellectual style that we&#8217;re so used to hearing. &#8220;Not Where You Saw&#8221; tells the riveting tale of one brother&#8217;s courageous stand for justice. Check it out: (via [...]]]></description>
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<p><img class="size-full wp-image-5416 alignright" style="margin-left: 15px; margin-right: 15px;" title="Not Where You Saw" src="http://scriptwrecked.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/NotWhereYouSaw.jpg" alt="Not Where You Saw" width="100" height="100" /><a href="http://johnramseycomedy.com" target="_blank">John Ramsey</a>  and his brother have created a hilarious commentary track for one of their crappy home movies. They critique the footage in that stilted self-congratulatory, pseudo-intellectual style that we&#8217;re so used to hearing.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><span style="color: #333399;">&#8220;Not Where You Saw&#8221; tells the riveting tale of one brother&#8217;s courageous stand for justice.</span></p>
<p>Check it out:</p>
<p><iframe src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/kLElgnjVCpU" frameborder="0" width="640" height="480"></iframe></p>
<p>(via <a href="http://www.geekosystem.com/home-video-commentary/" target="_blank">geekosystem</a>)</p>
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		<title>Modern Family as a Horror Movie [Video]</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Dec 2011 05:51:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Trevor Mayes</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Modern Family &#8211; Horror Movie Trailer Here&#8217;s a little something to balance out all that holiday cheer. If you watch ABC&#8217;s hilarious Modern Family, you&#8217;ll know that Alex Dunphy is just a check box or two away from being an evil genius. So I decided to recut Modern Family as a horror movie. In this extended trailer, all [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h4><strong>Modern Family &#8211; Horror Movie Trailer</strong></h4>
<p><img class="size-full wp-image-5353 alignleft" style="border-style: initial; border-color: initial; margin-left: 15px; margin-right: 15px;" title="Alex Dunphy - Evil Genius" src="http://scriptwrecked.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/AlexDunphy-EvilGenius.jpg" alt="Alex Dunphy - Evil Genius" width="100" height="100" />Here&#8217;s a little something to balance out all that holiday cheer. If you watch ABC&#8217;s hilarious <em>Modern Family</em>, you&#8217;ll know that Alex Dunphy is just a check box or two away from being an evil genius. So I decided to recut <em>Modern Family</em> as a horror movie.</p>
<p>In this extended trailer, all hell breaks loose at the Dunphy household over the Christmas holidays.</p>
<p><iframe src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/eVKbWTUxQg8" frameborder="0" width="640" height="360"></iframe></p>
<p>Funny? Horrifying? Both? Let me know what you think.</p>
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		<title>The Villain&#8217;s Point of View</title>
		<link>http://scriptwrecked.com/2011/10/19/the-villains-point-of-view/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Oct 2011 20:47:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Trevor Mayes</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Crafting an Authentic Villain Gone are the days of the mustache-twirling villain who is just evil for evil&#8217;s sake. These days to make your villain engaging and believable he or she must be authentic. So to craft your realistic villain, it&#8217;s critical that you see the world from their point of view. After all, &#8220;Everyone&#8217;s the [...]]]></description>
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<p>Gone are the days of the mustache-twirling villain who is just evil for evil&#8217;s sake. These days to make your villain engaging and believable he or she must be authentic.</p>
<p>So to craft your realistic villain, it&#8217;s critical that you see the world from their point of view. After all, &#8220;Everyone&#8217;s the hero of their own narrative.&#8221;</p>
<p>As a great reminder of that truth, CRACKED.com has produced another terrific movie-themed article: <em><a href="http://www.cracked.com/photoplasty_267_26-great-movies-from-villains-point-view/" target="_blank">26 Great Movies from the Villain&#8217;s Point of View</a></em>.</p>
<p>Here are a few of my favorite user-submitted posters:</p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><img class="aligncenter" title="The Jewelry Thieves (Lord of the Rings)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/8/8/9/96889.jpg?v=1" alt="The Jewelry Thieves (Lord of the Rings)" width="350" height="497" /></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><img class="aligncenter" title="The Senator Kelly Story (The X-Men)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/6/1/1/96611.jpg?v=1" alt="The Senator Kelly Story (The X-Men)" width="389" height="600" /></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><img class="aligncenter" title="Terrible Shepherds (Brokeback Mountain)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/6/3/4/96634.jpg?v=1" alt="Terrible Shepherds (Brokeback Mountain)" width="400" height="509" /></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><img class="aligncenter" title="Iceberg (Titanic)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/6/3/3/96633.jpg?v=1" alt="Iceberg (Titanic)" width="400" height="666" /></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><img class="aligncenter" title="The Empire Tries Really Hard (The Empire Strikes Back)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/8/9/0/96890_v1.jpg" alt="The Empire Tries Really Hard (The Empire Strikes Back)" width="450" height="695" /></p>
<p><img class="aligncenter" title="Alone (Alien)" src="http://i.crackedcdn.com/phpimages/photoshop/6/4/4/96644.jpg?v=1" alt="Alone (Alien)" width="450" height="997" /></p>
<p>The <a href="http://www.cracked.com/photoplasty_267_26-great-movies-from-villains-point-view/" target="_blank">full article</a> has a bunch more great ones, so check it out.</p>
<p>Which one is your favorite? And can anyone explain the &#8220;Vector&#8221; movie poster to me?</p>
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		<title>Surprise Your Audience</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Mar 2011 00:39:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Trevor Mayes</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A friend sent me this excerpt from a recent interview with David E. Kelley (Harry&#8217;s Law, Boston Legal, Boston Public, The Practice, Ally McBeal, Chicago Hope, L.A. Law). It highlights an important mindset to have when crafting scenes: L.A. Law is where we first got a taste of what would be your trademark, those surprise, odd [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-4219" style="margin-left: 20px; margin-right: 20px;" title="Ros goes down the elevator shaft" src="http://scriptwrecked.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/LALaw-Elevator.jpg" alt="Ros goes down the elevator shaft" width="200" height="267" />A friend sent me this excerpt from a recent interview with <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0005082/" target="_blank">David E. Kelley</a> (<em>Harry&#8217;s Law, Boston Legal, Boston Public, The Practice, Ally McBeal, Chicago Hope, L.A. Law</em>). It highlights an important mindset to have when crafting scenes:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><span style="color: #333399;"><strong>L.A. Law is where we first got a taste of what would be your trademark, those surprise, odd twists, like <a href="http://www.ew.com/ew/gallery/0,,20321301_20426924_20849188,00.html" target="_blank">Roz going down the elevator shaft</a>. Where do those ideas come from?</strong></span></p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><span style="color: #333399;">I promise it isn’t drugs. You know, you sort of get smarter through the years, but that’s the one question I’m really still unable to answer. I do subscribe to the theory that it is entertainment, and when people sit down in their La-Z-Boy chair at the end of the night, they maybe should be able to see something that they’re not going to see in everyday life. So arguments of mine [between characters] will tend to be more melodramatic, and some of the eccentricities will be heightened. That’s just kind of what I like to do. Also, I loved The Twilight Zone as a kid, and Outer Limits and shows like that, which went in directions that you just never imagined. I do do that. I do say, &#8220;Okay, this is the scene, this is the normal way it would go. Is there another way it could possibly go that fits within the context of the show that you may not see coming?&#8221;</span></p>
<p>So what are the important takeaways? Give the audience:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">A) &#8220;something that they&#8217;re not going to see in everyday life.&#8221;<br />
B) something that they &#8220;may not see coming.&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Bonus</strong></p>
<p>If you have 4 1/2 minutes, I highly recommend watching the following animated short that I found recently, created by <a href="http://grickle.com/" target="_blank">Graham Annable</a>. It has several moments that I hadn&#8217;t seen before and definitely didn&#8217;t see coming.</p>
<p>Pay special attention to how the slow pacing (especially in one particular scene) is brilliantly utilized for humorous effect.</p>
<p><iframe title="YouTube video player" width="640" height="390" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/tuhZuMl9StM" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe></p>
<p>Full David E. Kelley interview via <a href="http://nymag.com/daily/entertainment/2011/03/david_e_kelley_interview_wonde.html?mid=373214&amp;rid=422568499" target="_blank">Vulture</a>.</p>
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