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Formatting Multi-Scene Montages Oct 20

Reader Question: Formatting Multi-Scene Montages

I’ve been responding to Scriptwrecked reader questions, via email, these past few months. Thought I might as well share a couple of my responses on the website so others can benefit. Here’s a question from Steve.

Question

I’m writing a musical, and am working [with a] montage that spans months of concert touring, different situations, and even snippets of dialogue.  It’s important that the reader know that this is a true montage, over music. How would you write that?

Answer

That’s a great question. These days, you have a lot more leeway with the formatting of your scripts. Basically, whatever puts the correct images and sounds into your reader’s mind, is the right way to format something. That being said, if there’s an existing way to illustrate something, that readers are accustomed to seeing, then I’d say to go with that option.

However, I’ve found that the simplest and most effective method to accomplish this type of montage is as follows:

BEGIN MULT-SCENE MONTAGE
INT. JACK’S BAR – NIGHT
The band plays to an almost empty room, but it doesn't dampen their enthusiasm.
INT. URBAN RESTAURANT – NIGHT
A packed audience listens intently, as the band rocks out.
They finish their set to thunderous applause.
                               BAND MEMBER #1
                         Thank you!
EXT. PACKED STADIUM – NIGHT
The deafening roar of the crowd would drown out the vocals on most bands. But these
guys are THE PURPLE DRAGONS – the world’s newest rock gods.
The lead singer belts out lyrics that whip the crowd into a frenzy.
END MULTI-SCENE MONTAGE

You get the idea. It’s the easiest, clearest way to do things, in my opinion.

Other options include using a right-justified transition and calling it MONTAGE:

… But I don’t agree with that. It’s not just a transition, so it might confuse some readers as to where the montage ends.

Another more tried and true technique is to set up a scene heading as follows:

MONTAGE – THE BAND’S RISE TO THE TOP
-- INT. JACK’S BAR – NIGHT
The band plays to an almost empty room, but it doesn't dampen their enthusiasm.
-- INT. URBAN RESTAURANT – NIGHT
A packed audience listens intently, as the band rocks out.
They finish their set to thunderous applause.
                               BAND MEMBER #1
                         Thank you!
-- EXT. PACKED STADIUM – NIGHT
The deafening roar of the crowd would drown out the vocals on most bands. But these
guys are THE PURPLE DRAGONS – the world’s newest rock gods.
The lead singer belts out lyrics that whip the crowd into a frenzy.
EXT. HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Yada yada yada.

You could also use A) … B) … C) … instead of the bullet points.

The Difference Between “Tentpole” and “High-Concept” Jan 05

Reader Questions: Tentpole vs. High Concept

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Tentpole

I received some good questions from Lauren the other day:

What is the difference between a ten-pole [sic] movie and a high concept movie? Or do they always work together? Is there a minimum budget or max budget?

A “tentpole” movie is one that a studio hopes will do extremely well at the box office. Just like a pole holds up a tent, such a movie will provide the necessary financial support to the studio.

The term: “high-concept” is a little trickier to define. Essentially it’s an innovative movie idea that immediately captures viewers’ imaginations in a few words and is believed to have mass-market appeal.

As Steve Kaire writes in this insightful article, a high-concept movie can be sold on its pitch. It’s not execution dependent.

Movies like Jurassic Park (cloned dinosaurs running amuck in a theme park) or The Sixth Sense (a pscyhiatrist trying to help a boy who sees dead people) are high concept.

Movies like Star Wars, or Black Swan are execution dependent, and therefore not high-concept. It’s hard to describe them in a few words in a way that does them justice and excites the viewer.

An original script may get made because it’s high-concept. If it does well, then its sequel may be set up as a tentpole for the studio.

In fact, most tentpole movies these days are sequels or based on franchises with built-in audiences. Usually that means they are big budget productions, where the studios put lots of money into them, expecting a lot more money to come back.

But there are no hard and fast rules on budgeting. It depends what type of movie it is. Twilight only had a $37 million dollar budget, but was expected to be a hit (though, it went on to shatter expectations worldwide).

Humor

Is it important to always add humor to high concept scripts, for the studios and agents sake?

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High-Concept

No, not at all. It depends entirely on the genre of the script you’re writing. But most movies have at least a moment or two of humor — if only to provide a brief respite for the audience. That’s why they call it “comic relief.”

Regardless of the genre though, the goal is to make your script as enjoyable to read as possible. Humor might be a part of it, but ultimately it’s about writing an engaging script. Make the reader want to turn the page to see what happens next.

So if you’re writing a dark horror movie, don’t feel that you need to add humor to the scene descriptions just to make the read more enjoyable. It would probably have the opposite effect.

However, if you’re writing an action-adventure, where part of the goal is to make the audience laugh, then have at it. If you’re writing a pure comedy, it’s probably a necessity.

Spiderman Reboot

Would you say the movie “Spiderman-Reboot” is high concept?

I would say that whether the Spider-Man reboot is high-concept or not is irrelevant. It’s a franchise movie, and a tentpole. We know it’s going to be a hit.

“High-concept” is usually applied to stories that haven’t been seen before on the silver screen. Spider-Man has been around for a while now. Everyone’s going to go see it, not because of an innovative story concept, but rather because we already know what a Spider-Man movie entails.

The original Spider-Man story (young man gets bitten by radioactive spider and develops spider-like superpowers)? Yes, very high concept.

Do you have any questions you’d like me to answer? Send ‘em in!


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