“You never get a second chance to make a first impression.”
- Anonymous screenwriter who learned the hard way
$59 Script Notes
Here’s what you get:
A thorough critique of your script’s highlights and problems areas, with specific suggestions for improvement.
3 pages of notes, including:
- Critique (Full script review covering strengths and weaknesses of: concept, structure, characters, dialogue and style)
- Suggestions (Tips and specific ways you can improve your script)
- Final Grade (Either “Pass,” “Recommend,” or “Consider”)
- Logline (One or two sentences encapsulating your premise in a compelling way)
Bonus:
- You’ll also receive Margin Notes (A PDF copy of your script with the specific typos, issues, etc. that I find, highlighted right on the pages where they occur, for easy reference)
Satisfaction Guaranteed
Your scripts will always be read and critiqued by me, personally.
I’m confident you’ll appreciate this service; so much so, that if you feel you haven’t received valuable feedback — I’ll give you your money back!
If you’ve already checked around, you’ll know that this is quite simply the best value for your money anywhere.
Are you ready? Give yourself the best chance to breakthrough this year!
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- Trevor Mayes
