by Trevor Mayes | Jun 16, 2018 | Script Notes, Script Proofreading
It’s finally here! One of my favorite films of all time is THE INCREDIBLES… Not just favorite animated films — favorite films, period. I just think it’s brilliant. In celebration of the opening week of the long-awaited sequel that was just...
by Trevor Mayes | Jun 13, 2018 | Modern Craft, Style, Writing
Efficiency Screenwriting is all about efficiency. Maximum impact with the minimum number of words. So one of my biggest pet peeves is when I see the following in scripts: She shakes her head no. There are two big things wrong with that action line: Why is the word...
by Trevor Mayes | Jun 11, 2018 | Low-Budget, My Experiences, Shorts, Wake Unto Me
Wake Unto Me A woman alleging to be a time traveler makes a startling proposition to someone she claims will become her future spouse. Most of you know me for my proofreading and script consulting services, but I also dabble in filmmaking. My last short film, TRIPLE...
by Trevor Mayes | Apr 5, 2018 | Film Festivals, My Experiences, Shorts, TRIPLE TIMe
World Premiere of TRIPLE TIMe After some private screenings and notable contest wins, I’m proud to announce that my short film TRIPLE TIMe is having its official world premiere at the Roswell Film Festival! Here’s more info on the event that takes place...
by Trevor Mayes | Dec 20, 2017 | Style, Words, Writing
Dude, aren’t all verbs active? Good question, smartass! The truth is, there are passive and active forms of verbs. The active form (without the “ing”) is almost always the best one to use. For example, I often see a variation of the following...
