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Henry Miller’s Writing Commandments

Henry Miller’s Writing Commandments

I must confess, my only real exposure to author Henry Miller is the provocative film, Henry and June. Based on that movie, I'm surprised he found time to write (Lucky bastard!). But nonetheless he seemed to have an effective approach. Here's a graphic, courtesy of The...

Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, SzzzzZZZZ….

Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, SzzzzZZZZ….

Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy - NOT a Thriller Anyone else a feel little disappointed by this movie? I've decided that you can't call your movie a Thriller if A) no one runs in it, and B) the protagonist is never shown to be in any real danger. An intense Espionage...

Home Video Commentary Track [video]

Home Video Commentary Track [video]

Not Where You Saw John Ramsey  and his brother have created a hilarious commentary track for one of their crappy home movies. They critique the footage in that stilted self-congratulatory, pseudo-intellectual style that we're so used to hearing. "Not Where You Saw"...

Congratulations to Chris Bullett!

Congratulations to Chris Bullett!

My buddy Chris Bullett just won the November 2011 Best Script Award in the Amazon Studios contest!!! What a great way to surge into 2012. His $20,000 winning script is called Gideon's Law. Here's the logline for this Thriller/Action-Adventure: A disgraced young cop is...

5 Reasons Why THE WIRE Was So Damn Good

5 Reasons Why THE WIRE Was So Damn Good

The Wire, which aired on HBO between 2002 and 2008, is widely acknowledged as one of the greatest television dramas of all time. Everyone knows it. No one disputes it. Yet, for whatever reason, I'd never taken the time to watch a single episode... Until recently, when...

Which type of person are you?

Which type of person are you?

Two Types of People There are two types of people in this world -- those who are bothered by small mistakes, and those who are not. And what's interesting is that both types have a hard time believing that the other type really exists. "How can you not see that...

Do you write active scene descriptions?

Do you write active scene descriptions?

Make your objects move! There's a reason that scene description is also known as "action lines." It's important that your descriptions contain the feeling of movement, even when none actually exists. Here's an example of a weak way to describe objects at a location...

New Script Proofreading Service

New Script Proofreading Service

Professional Script Proofreading In addition to providing insightful script notes, I've recently been proofreading screenplays for clients who have asked for it. I figure there might be others who could use a low cost proofreading service, so I've decided to make it...