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Home Video Commentary Track [video]

Home Video Commentary Track [video]

Not Where You Saw John Ramsey  and his brother have created a hilarious commentary track for one of their crappy home movies. They critique the footage in that stilted self-congratulatory, pseudo-intellectual style that we're so used to hearing. "Not Where You Saw"...

Congratulations to Chris Bullett!

Congratulations to Chris Bullett!

My buddy Chris Bullett just won the November 2011 Best Script Award in the Amazon Studios contest!!! What a great way to surge into 2012. His $20,000 winning script is called Gideon's Law. Here's the logline for this Thriller/Action-Adventure: A disgraced young cop is...

5 Reasons Why THE WIRE Was So Damn Good

5 Reasons Why THE WIRE Was So Damn Good

The Wire, which aired on HBO between 2002 and 2008, is widely acknowledged as one of the greatest television dramas of all time. Everyone knows it. No one disputes it. Yet, for whatever reason, I'd never taken the time to watch a single episode... Until recently, when...

Which type of person are you?

Which type of person are you?

Two Types of People There are two types of people in this world -- those who are bothered by small mistakes, and those who are not. And what's interesting is that both types have a hard time believing that the other type really exists. "How can you not see that...

Do you write active scene descriptions?

Do you write active scene descriptions?

Make your objects move! There's a reason that scene description is also known as "action lines." It's important that your descriptions contain the feeling of movement, even when none actually exists. Here's an example of a weak way to describe objects at a location...

New Script Proofreading Service

New Script Proofreading Service

Professional Script Proofreading In addition to providing insightful script notes, I've recently been proofreading screenplays for clients who have asked for it. I figure there might be others who could use a low cost proofreading service, so I've decided to make it...

What’s The Best Part Of An Action Movie?

What’s The Best Part Of An Action Movie?

Face/Off I hadn't seen John Woo's 1997 action masterpiece -- FACE/OFF -- for over a decade. So when it came on T.V. the other night, I couldn't resist the opportunity to revisit (and try to remember) what I had loved so much about the movie in the first place. Here's...